[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Statyk]

The blue among the orange is kind of bold, so it serves as a focal point. Your eyes will go straight to the crack in the wall. I'd suggest maybe putting it above the door (perhaps a ceiling crack instead) and light the door with a blue light, this way the door stands out a bit and it has a bit of a purpose.

[OriginalUsername]

The blue among the orange is kind of bold, so it serves as a focal point. Your eyes will go straight to the crack in the wall. I'd suggest maybe putting it above the door (perhaps a ceiling crack instead) and light the door with a blue light, this way the door stands out a bit and it has a bit of a purpose.

Sounds good, I'll try that. Thanks

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Looks much better now, thanks. Don't mind the walls, I'm not done yet.

[7heDubz]

Oooooh Much better, I'm liking it.

[OriginalUsername]

Oooooh Much better, I'm liking it.

Thanks, I'll post an update soon

I added some stuff

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[Streetboat]

yessss, bouncing that blue light off the water onto the nearby walls is a great idea

caustics ftw

[7heDubz]

Whatdya think of, instead of a contest where we take screenshots, We instead make an entire map for people to just roam in and then, after roaming, each contestant may give the map a rating, 1-10, Scores are avg'ed up to see whom did "the best". But in general, all in good fun.

Think I should pop open a thread for this?

Time constraint of A month or maybe two weeks, would really get blood pumping and mapping rolling

Thoughts?

And yes I feel this fits here. If you really thinks it warranted a whole new thread then I got the answer I was looking for here!

[OriginalUsername]

So instead of screenshots, just maps? Sounds good.

[Kman]

inspired by http://imgur.com/a/1WFfN

this isn't actually going to be a full map or used for anything i was just bored and felt like making something and i thought that photoset was cool

[7heDubz]

So instead of screenshots, just maps? Sounds good.

Awesome, One person for it, If I can get one or two more people interested I'll make a thread for this, And yes just a map where the goal is no scripting, Just roaming a map. Complete, and utter, Aesthetics and atmosphere.

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inspired by http://imgur.com/a/1WFfN

this isn't actually going to be a full map or used for anything i was just bored and felt like making something and i thought that photoset was cool

Love the tablecloths, I would have to say just randomly that the couch to the left feels out of place to me. Maybe my eye doesn't like the green..
The far bookshelf is cluttered, The billboards faint, I'm currently messing with the editor myself so I cannot think of anything i would say that is bad about this At the moment. I may come back to it.

I enjoyed the photoset as well, thankyou.

[OriginalUsername]

Mechanical room

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