[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Hardarm]

Here's a little storage room I made (please note that I'm horrible at mapping) and I'd like to know your critics:



You are in a mansion in

Spoiler below!

"The world of Madness"

. That's how I later explain the body parts and things, but I mainly need advice about lighting.

You need to take time on that, there's too much light for 5-6 candles there.
Try to create gradients, lighter near the candle and dark far away from it.
That doesn't look like a storage room anyway, It looks like a room with some straight barrels and boxes placed upon a floor. It's "madness" it's not twister (lol)
Make a lot of dirt, rolled down boxes, rotated shelves and fallen down shelves.
Don't make em grid snapped, naturize them! Nobody is stopping you from rotating them a bit.

You have to focus at least 2 hours on creating a decent room, because you can.
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Weell.. Since that s**t was fake at least i'd want some criticism on it
What do you think?

[PutraenusAlivius]

Just give what the hell is wrong with it.

[Hardarm]

Just give what the hell is wrong with it.

Light looks very sparse. looks like the light is coming out of nowhere. Plus there is poor mapping, solve that with ornaments.

NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?

That's not cool, that image okay, it's been viewed a lot because it was a part of that 'joke', but what about some other ones? You did the same thing, I wanted some criticism on that image, I never paste images under not-criticized ones, or at least, I try to review it and then do it.

[PutraenusAlivius]

Just give what the hell is wrong with it.

Light looks very sparse. looks like the light is coming out of nowhere. Plus there is poor mapping, solve that with ornaments.

NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?

That's not cool, that image okay, it's been viewed a lot because it was a part of that 'joke', but what about some other ones? You did the same thing, I wanted some criticism on that image, I never paste images under not-criticized ones, or at least, I try to review it and then do it.

Coincidence. But seriously, I was going to the bathroom first. A guy cannot hold pee. God.

[Adny]

NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?

lol

[Hardarm]

NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?

lol

http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thr...#pid205239
http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thr...#pid207051

In the first one I got criticism from you, but it was a fairly big zone so I preferred to have some other people to be criticized, I mean 40 mins had passed :x

Second one... turn the page lol


Anyways, peace. I'm not angry or anything eh
Shit happens c:

[Romulator]

NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?

Now I feel bad.. I was just about to post a screenshot...
Oh well, I'll wait

[PutraenusAlivius]

I think it's great. I would actually use some billboards and some steam. Great job.

[Adny]

What an uncanny coincidence. To be fair, each of your screens posted have at least 1 direct reply (even if 50% of those replies is Robosprog ejaculating over your work).

Your's look great though Hardy (although most recent one looks a bit AMFP for my taste). My only real qualm with it would be the textures of the pipes, they don't look very natural; hard to put my finger on it.

[Romulator]

Well, I think it is safe now :3

It is purposely in Grayscale in case you wonder about the effect.

The larger image can be found here: http://oi40.tinypic.com/j8fltt.jpg