[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

**Rapture** · 06-24-2013, 05:37 AM

In the first picture, the right streetlamp. When I first looked at it, I saw the billboard (Particle effect/billboard/whatever underneath the light) and I thought it looked like a possibly animated dust illuminated by light thing.

But I realize now that I was looking at the texture behind it on the wall I think. xD

**FlawlessHappiness** · 06-24-2013, 11:01 AM

Ah! Yea, but thatwould be awesome indeed

**7heDubz** · 06-24-2013, 10:05 PM

Time for an update on my screenshot WIP!

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**FlawlessHappiness** · 06-24-2013, 11:50 PM

It's great, but something stand alone to me.
There is one big tree. One, big tree! And only a few plants... How could a tree grow this big, and no other plants had survived? I find that it needs more vegetation.

**7heDubz** · 06-25-2013, 12:05 AM

Alrighty thanks BeeKayK, i just find that there isnt enough vegetation available. I'll work on it ^^
Another picture, A different map, i feel like i might be overposting my pictures to be critiqe'd Tongue

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It's missing the custom logo but otherwise this would be my opening main menu to my IFC. Its the office during the day that you wake up in (although the game takes place in the dark night time)

(crap i just noticed the decal's didnt carry over in the export... the floor's a bit boring because of that ill have to fix that sorry!)

**FlawlessHappiness** · 06-25-2013, 12:12 AM

(06-25-2013, 12:05 AM)WIWWM Wrote: Alrighty thanks BeeKayK, i just find that there isnt enough vegetation available. I'll work on it ^^

Remember that you can always not only place a fern, but also scale it to variate it. Ferns and mushrooms! Smile

(06-25-2013, 12:05 AM)WIWWM Wrote: Another picture, A different map, i feel like i might be overposting my pictures to be critiqe'd

It's very well lit, but maybe too lit. As far as i can see there is only one window. The light shining through the window is nearly just as bright as anything else. The darkest spot should be the walls beside the window, since nothing is shining at it.

You might want to put a carpet in there. The floor looks very dull.

Also, I'm not sure, but it looks like you need to rotate the curtains 180 degrees.

In my opinion, the shelf has been scaled too much. You could have 2 instead. or just leave it to 1.

Billboards are great!

**Kurton** · 06-25-2013, 02:25 AM

I think you could tint the light to something warmer, or at least not pure white. Purely white light like that almost always looks artificial.

I agree you should add a rug to the floor too, something to break it up so it's not so uniform. Smile

**Exostalker** · 06-25-2013, 10:10 PM

(06-24-2013, 10:05 PM)WIWWM Wrote: Time for an update on my screenshot WIP!

To me it would be more appealing if that light from up would be brighter, now it's not standing out in any way... more light to shine that center area with watter dropping

**ReadingNotAllowed** · 06-25-2013, 11:27 PM

Got some criticism for me? Big Grin

http://i.imgur.com/vQJyEy6.jpg

**Wapez** · 06-25-2013, 11:33 PM

(06-25-2013, 11:27 PM)ReadingNotAllowed Wrote: Got some criticism for me?

http://i.imgur.com/vQJyEy6.jpg

Cool concept. However... The door doesn't fit in the doorway. Tongue