Dark Deeds (Temporary Name)

[Fralexxelarf]

First Post:

This is just one room, I just want some feedback before I start on my next one, there's really no story yet.
Keep in mind that this is my first map

http://www.mediafire.com/?z3s567opuo35hrv

Here's my updated version: http://www.mediafire.com/?8l9i7awa52yyyl5

Note!
1. I know that the notes dont say anything, YET. I have written most of them but I don't want to tell you an unfinished story.
2. Once I've made a couple more maps the story will enter closed beta.
3. Nothing is complete yet.

[Makoton]

Decided to try it, and for a first map this is really well done. Level design was simple, albeit, but with some practice, you'll get far better.

Spoiler below!

The scare with the flying teleporting naked man coming out of the wardrobe was great. Took me by surprise, even after binging on PewDiePie videos.

Other than the little problems, like a bit of poke-through on the walls, this is a good start to mapping as you seem to have some experience with scripting. Keep it up!

[Fralexxelarf]

thanks!

[Lontasm]

!SPOILER! I got scared shitless from that man in the closet! Damn good
That was a beast scare

[thetury455]

ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

[Fralexxelarf]

ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

Thanks , I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.

[thetury455]

ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

Thanks , I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.

its gonna be great im looking forword to it

[Quotentote]

naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings

[Fralexxelarf]

naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings

Thanks for dying xD cause i forgot to unlock the door after you have died.
Everything Else is fixed, ans I'm going to upload the fixed version as soon as i get home

[Fralexxelarf]

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