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				I really like that 2nd shot, great mood captured there. In the 3rd one the moonlight looks a little too strong, what with the rest of the room's light being more neutralized. 
 
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				Wow, right when I read the story, I told myself "Wow! This sounds like a good story!" 
You got me hooked with just the story! And after that, looking at your pics make it seem like you're a pro in CS making.
 
I really can't wait for this to come out!    Especially since it's a "serious" story. By that I mean, a lot of people have just been making little CS's that have nothing but jumpscares and pointless stories etc. Not judging or nothing, but It's hard to find a good CS that is serious now-a-days.
 
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				 (03-20-2012, 05:20 AM)Kurton Wrote:  I really like that 2nd shot, great mood captured there. In the 3rd one the moonlight looks a little too strong, what with the rest of the room's light being more neutralized. 
 
Good so far, I hope you keep going with it (and that it gets more attention too) Thanks. I'll edit that room to make more sense. I really appreciate everything you said!
  (03-20-2012, 05:53 AM)Xvideogamer720X Wrote:  Wow, right when I read the story, I told myself "Wow! This sounds like a good story!" 
You got me hooked with just the story! And after that, looking at your pics make it seem like you're a pro in CS making. 
 
I really can't wait for this to come out!   Especially since it's a "serious" story. By that I mean, a lot of people have just been making little CS's that have nothing but jumpscares and pointless stories etc. Not judging or nothing, but It's hard to find a good CS that is serious now-a-days. 
 
Anyone agree? Thanks for the feedback! Inspiration has been found! And I definitely agree, finding a well-done no-jumpscare CS is more difficult than it should be.
			  
			
			
 
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				 (03-20-2012, 10:58 PM)Strembitsky Wrote:   (03-20-2012, 05:53 AM)Xvideogamer720X Wrote:  Wow, right when I read the story, I told myself "Wow! This sounds like a good story!" 
You got me hooked with just the story! And after that, looking at your pics make it seem like you're a pro in CS making. 
 
I really can't wait for this to come out!   Especially since it's a "serious" story. By that I mean, a lot of people have just been making little CS's that have nothing but jumpscares and pointless stories etc. Not judging or nothing, but It's hard to find a good CS that is serious now-a-days. 
 
Anyone agree? Thanks for the feedback! Inspiration has been found! And I definitely agree, finding a well-done no-jumpscare CS is more difficult than it should be. That's what I was aiming for    I'm the type of person who needs inspiration as well, but not only that, I also give encouragement too haha. Like my story, I was thinking of abandoning it and such, but then just two (yes, TWO) people said to not give up and go on! They even understood if it sucked, because they told me it's ok due to the fact that it's the first CS I'm doing. (Idk if I should post my moddb link here (I don't update my thread no more), don't wanna seem like a a-hole trying to steal this thread or something)
 
Not to mention that the watchers on my ModDb went from 20 to like 35 in just a week! That's insane and THAT'S what you call inspiration.    (sort of lol)
			  
			
			
			
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				Thanks a lot, bro! 
 
I am very excited for my CS now. I got a lot of good ideas, no, GREAT ideas for scares in my CS. No spoilers, though!
			 
			
			
 
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				 (03-21-2012, 07:48 PM)Strembitsky Wrote:  Thanks a lot, bro! 
 
I am very excited for my CS now. I got a lot of good ideas, no, GREAT ideas for scares in my CS. No spoilers, though! If they are jump scares, dont put too many. Jump scares are consider "cheap" sometimes and people get over it. 
			  
			
			
			
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Don't worry, I will try to use no jump scares at all. Some may be debated as jump scares, but they won't be unrealistic/impossible things that would never happen without a reason such as ... Nope, can't share too much info   
			 
			
			
 
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				 (03-22-2012, 04:01 AM)Strembitsky Wrote:  Don't worry, I will try to use no jump scares at all. Some may be debated as jump scares, but they won't be unrealistic/impossible things that would never happen without a reason such as ... Nope, can't share too much info   Atta boy! Now go kick some butt and give us a good CS!   
			 
			
			
			
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				 (03-22-2012, 04:10 AM)Strembitsky Wrote:  I Like it! 
When u think this will be finished?? 
I'm also almost finished my Cs.. "Nocturnal Confusion" 
I will follow u. 
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