Do Not Drink Too Much

[MatiaSika]

Here is my playthrough http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46RPsvlzp8c







I liked the story, I thought it would be a lot shorter than it really was. No real problems or anything besides some texture glitches.

Spoiler below!

I also had trouble finding that pot, I guess I didn't look hard enough. Also I think the best part was the torture chamber at the end. Good story.

Thanks



Good to hear that you liked it When there is coming another parts of playthrough?

I liked part 1

Thanks! And the other parts will be available in a day or so. If I am able to render more than 1 part at once, I'll try to upload a part per day.

Okay, i try to wait some..

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Kannattaa koittaa, oon saanu siitä lähes tulkoon vain hyvää palautetta. Suosittelen!

[MatiaSika]

Here is my playthrough http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46RPsvlzp8c



I liked the story, I thought it would be a lot shorter than it really was. No real problems or anything besides some texture glitches.

Spoiler below!

I also had trouble finding that pot, I guess I didn't look hard enough. Also I think the best part was the torture chamber at the end. Good story.

Nice Let's play! I enjoyed. May I link those let's plays to my description?

[RawkBandMan]

I was playing it all good and dandy, up until I got to the

Spoiler below!

levers. I checked play throughs to know what to do, and I did exactly as they did, but the door still didn't go up...

[MatiaSika]

I was playing it all good and dandy, up until I got to the

Spoiler below!

levers. I checked play throughs to know what to do, and I did exactly as they did, but the door still didn't go up...

Spoiler below!

There must be I and IV down, and II, III, V up.

[MaZiCUT]

People should not include stuff from Justine in their custom stories

not everyone has that dlc.

[MatiaSika]

My new Custom Story "I Got Invited" is coming tomorrow.
I hope many of you will play it

[Adny]

Review (Some spoilers):

Story - Feels like another generic Amnesia story.

Intro - very sudden, poor grammar first strikes here!

Mapping - Not much detail (except for a few rooms), a lot of areas that don't make sense. A lot of issues, one in particular is use of billboards; they cut through a lot of walls. Some welder issues (especially in the cellar area). Planes we scrunched together, I suggest using plane ties to "space them out". Mapping quality generally seemed to improve as the levels progressed; I found this interesting.

Lighting- Not much contrast or color in the lighting; seems that there are no spotlights/boxlights. In fact, it feels like you didn't use any ambient lights at all; just the natural light that comes off of candles/torches. Lots of light leaking through walls as well.

Scares - Poofers, generic monster+closet encounters, jumpscares (i.e. iron maiden sound effect for no discernible reason)

Spelling/Grammar - At points made it very difficult to understand the story; I'd suggest Sumer's grammar revision services

Puzzles - Well done.

Sounds - Little/no ambient sounds.

Music - Some areas with no music, but good music choices for each area that did have it.

Overall Rating - 3/5, better than many other available custom stories, but there is still plenty of room for improvement. Keep up the good work!

[MatiaSika]

Review (Some spoilers):

Story - Feels like another generic Amnesia story.

Intro - very sudden, poor grammar first strikes here!

Mapping - Not much detail (except for a few rooms), a lot of areas that don't make sense. A lot of issues, one in particular is use of billboards; they cut through a lot of walls. Some welder issues (especially in the cellar area). Planes we scrunched together, I suggest using plane ties to "space them out". Mapping quality generally seemed to improve as the levels progressed; I found this interesting.

Lighting- Not much contrast or color in the lighting; seems that there are no spotlights/boxlights. In fact, it feels like you didn't use any ambient lights at all; just the natural light that comes off of candles/torches. Lots of light leaking through walls as well.

Scares - Poofers, generic monster+closet encounters, jumpscares (i.e. iron maiden sound effect for no discernible reason)

Spelling/Grammar - At points made it very difficult to understand the story; I'd suggest Sumer's grammar revision services

Puzzles - Well done.

Sounds - Little/no ambient sounds.

Music - Some areas with no music, but good music choices for each area that did have it.

Overall Rating - 3/5, better than many other available custom stories, but there is still plenty of room for improvement. Keep up the good work!

Well, I'm working with my new CS, so I try to invaste in sounds, lightning and details. Thanks for feedback!

[kartanonperuna]

Somehow, by looking at the name of this story I knew it would be made by a finn.

[MatiaSika]

Somehow, by looking at the name of this story I knew it would be made by a finn.

Haha And you can think if it is good or bad..
Ja mä otan tuon ihan kohteliaisuutena