my first custom Story: The evil awakes

[Fishnugget]

here watch and learn, now i understand the bad kritik xDDDD
My Map works and have more Levels than one:

[Gaviao]

now i get it?You all hates this map because the story makes no sence?

yes they hate... its because they think that only LONG custom stories are good! i´ve seen that since they started to hate on pewdiepie maps, and after that... martin´s survival,it begins slowly,dark room,and alot of other custom stories! lost the lights is the worst custom story because you have to walk alot to do something... and everyone loved it!, but don´t worry. i loved your custom story, its really well made for a first custom story xD, next time remember to put sound on the doors trololololol(joke)

[Fishnugget]

YOu like my first map?
I dont know how to make sound on doors

[xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

Look, there's no reason to act that condescending in the video...nothing I said was meant as a personal offense and I'm sorry if it sounded that way. Still, I guess it was a bit unprofessional of me to give up so easily, so I'll give it another try.

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Game crashes as soon as I leave the map. Tried four times but to no avail...

[CorinthianMerchant]

[Fishnugget]

what is neighbourhood, pal.?

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In my Video the game crashes never...

[lolmaster]

Before mapping, I suggest learning a bit better English and read up on custom story resources.
Obviously, you are one of those people who jump right in to mapping after not learning anything about it.

[Fishnugget]

i tried to make a map i see many tutorials in youtube i spend many time in this custom story and i can english but just not all^^
Guys i am only 15, i cant speak english perfect

[Danny Boy]

i tried to make a map i see many tutorials in youtube i spend many time in this custom story and i can english but just not all^^
Guys i am only 15, i cant speak english perfect

Im flabbergasted....

[Danny Boy]

now i get it?You all hates this map because the story makes no sence?

yes they hate... its because they think that only LONG custom stories are good! i´ve seen that since they started to hate on pewdiepie maps, and after that... martin´s survival,it begins slowly,dark room,and alot of other custom stories! lost the lights is the worst custom story because you have to walk alot to do something... and everyone loved it!, but don´t worry. i loved your custom story, its really well made for a first custom story xD, next time remember to put sound on the doors trololololol(joke)

We don't hate pewdiepie's maps because they are long! its because they lack EVERYTHING! lack of good level design, lack of good scares, lack of originality, lack of thought in to them, lack of ambient, lack of good lighting, LACK OF EVERYTHING! People that make those custom story only make their half ass bullcrap so they can jerk off to pewdiepie while he plays their custom story! its not because they wanted to make a story and show to us. its only because of pewdiepie. hell most of them don't even like to make custom maps! so why in the world should we like something that was made by someone who clearly didn't give a fuck of what he as made?!