Nightmare While Awake Chapter 1 Demo

**ironman0001** · 10-01-2012, 05:53 PM

(10-01-2012, 05:50 PM)andyrockin123 Wrote: Corinthian, just accept the trolling and walk away. If he is by some inconceivable chance not trolling and is actually that ignorant, then his life will be hard enough without your painful words ;D

THANK YOU! Now i'm gonna work on another custom story! What should i name one of the teleporting naked guys?

**CorinthianMerchant** · 10-01-2012, 05:56 PM

Nevermind, this is a hopeless cause...

**Adny** · 10-01-2012, 05:57 PM

(10-01-2012, 05:53 PM)ironman0001 Wrote: THANK YOU! Now i'm gonna work on another custom story! What should i name one of the teleporting naked guys?

Eipeidwep. Now, begone foul beast!

**ironman0001** · 10-01-2012, 05:57 PM

(10-01-2012, 05:53 PM)ironman0001 Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:50 PM)andyrockin123 Wrote: Corinthian, just accept the trolling and walk away. If he is by some inconceivable chance not trolling and is actually that ignorant, then his life will be hard enough without your painful words ;D
THANK YOU! Now i'm gonna work on another custom story! What should i name one of the teleporting naked guys?

ALRIGHT FINE! How about a teleporting head? or a teleporting skull? Or a teleporting grunt? I gotta add a teleporting something!

**HumiliatioN** · 10-01-2012, 05:57 PM

Don't bother anymore helping him. He is just one fucking idiot who wouldn't listen anyone anymore, he is just selfish that's all.

**ironman0001** · 10-01-2012, 05:58 PM

(10-01-2012, 05:56 PM)CorinthianMerchant Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:48 PM)ironman0001 Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:41 PM)CorinthianMerchant Wrote:
(09-30-2012, 11:52 PM)ironman0001 Wrote: PFFT! Flying jesus (aka: Teleporting Naked Guys) Are the most popular jumpscares!

ironman0001,

Frictional Games out such hard work into Amnesia only to see it being destroyed by idiots.

Please, don't use this scare and create something serious.
Some of the most popular custom stories have teleporting naked guys! like Sealed, House of creep, Harmfuls Wrath, etc.
That's not the poinnnt...

You are planning to use a hated scare-method that will make people hate your story.

Please sit down and learn what makes a good story, and make something serious.

Are you kidding me? house of creep 3 has teleporting naked guys every 30 seconds and when i was downloading it, the guy who made it had nothing but positive comments! And that custom story was all over youtube!

(10-01-2012, 05:57 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: Don't bother anymore helping him. He is just one fucking idiot who wouldn't listen anyone anymore, he is just selfish that's all.

I'm selfish because i wanna add teleporting naked guys to MY custom story... legit...

(10-01-2012, 05:58 PM)ironman0001 Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:56 PM)CorinthianMerchant Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:48 PM)ironman0001 Wrote:
(10-01-2012, 05:41 PM)CorinthianMerchant Wrote:
(09-30-2012, 11:52 PM)ironman0001 Wrote: PFFT! Flying jesus (aka: Teleporting Naked Guys) Are the most popular jumpscares!

ironman0001,

Frictional Games out such hard work into Amnesia only to see it being destroyed by idiots.

Please, don't use this scare and create something serious.
Some of the most popular custom stories have teleporting naked guys! like Sealed, House of creep, Harmfuls Wrath, etc.
That's not the poinnnt...

You are planning to use a hated scare-method that will make people hate your story.

Please sit down and learn what makes a good story, and make something serious.
Are you kidding me? house of creep 3 has teleporting naked guys every 30 seconds and when i was downloading it, the guy who made it had nothing but positive comments! And that custom story was all over youtube!

(10-01-2012, 05:57 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote: Don't bother anymore helping him. He is just one fucking idiot who wouldn't listen anyone anymore, he is just selfish that's all.
I'm selfish because i wanna add teleporting naked guys to MY custom story... legit...

Why don't i call christopher nolan selfish because he didn't make bane more muscly in the batman dark knight rises movie...

**Kreekakon** · 10-01-2012, 06:15 PM

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**ironman0001** · 10-01-2012, 06:17 PM

(10-01-2012, 06:15 PM)Kreekakon Wrote: *Reaction to this thread*

No matter what... i am going to stick with tp naked guys... because alot of people get scared by it! I watch lets plays on youtube when someone is playing amnesia and they always yell and really get scared whenever they see a teleporting naked guy! You guys may not think it's scary but i'm not going to change the way i make a custom story just for like 4 or 5 people...

(09-30-2012, 03:26 PM)The chaser Wrote: This story doesn't have a decent ending. It just ends with a poofer and a wall? And, there are a lot of flickering textures. How much time have you spent in the level? For a single room I spent at last two hours. How much did you work it?

Also, this can't be even considered a demo. This is a not ended level. If you post a demo, at last post a decent finished level.

Sorry for this "bomb", but it's my way of thinking.

Spoiler below!

Actually, the walls in the corridor, why are so big? Put a lot of normal walls, it's what has to be done. The stair. There is a wall that can be seeked from the back, and I don't know if you noticed that the walls are invisible from the back. Also, if you look down, you can see the nothingness. Spend more time in level creation.

AHA! I just played the chasers custom story and his has teleporting naked guys! Why aren't you guys hating on him?

**Robby** · 10-01-2012, 06:35 PM

Ironman, I hate to break it down to you, but what you're trying to do is NOT good.

Listen. If you want a jumpscare, make it so that it matches with the story of your custom story. Teleporting naked guys are the worst of scares (and that's not me talking).

If you'd listen to what people are talking about, and read their criticisms, you might get an idea about "oh, this is good, let's keep it", and "this is bad, let's change that" is.

In short, TNG's are bad. If you'd change that, the people here might be friendlier. But if you fail to understand, I can't make it more detailed.

**ironman0001** · 10-01-2012, 06:37 PM

(10-01-2012, 06:35 PM)Nemet Robert Wrote: Ironman, I hate to break it down to you, but what you're trying to do is NOT good.

Listen. If you want a jumpscare, make it so that it matches with the story of your custom story. Teleporting naked guys are the worst of scares (and that's not me talking).

If you'd listen to what people are talking about, and read their criticisms, you might get an idea about "oh, this is good, let's keep it", and "this is bad, let's change that" is.

In short, TNG's are bad. If you'd change that, the people here might be friendlier. But if you fail to understand, I can't make it more detailed.

I'm going to repeat what is said... house of creep 3 has teleporting naked guys and it's about about a guy who likes to kill... So teleporting naked guys is not relatable with that story and yet... That custom story get's all kinds of positive feedback and people play it all the time on youtube...