The Seed (RELEASE)

**Red** · 12-20-2012, 04:42 PM

Decent story i'll give it a 2,5/5. (Average)

Minuses
-Better lighting(boxlights where too bright in some parts, some parts didn't even have them)
-More unique puzzles.
-Amb musics were too loud and some of them didn't fit the event.
-There were some clipping.
-And those 1*1 tile amout textures.

Scripting was decent. Nothing special.

Don't take this critism too seriosly it's just to help you with the future projects.

yay Elfen Lied! Big Grin

Sorry for mah bad english.

**str4wberrypanic** · 12-20-2012, 04:46 PM

(12-20-2012, 04:42 PM)Pyöveli Wrote: Decent story i'll give it a 2,5/5. (Average)

Minuses

-Better lighting(boxlights where too bright in some parts, some parts didn't even have them)

-More unique puzzles.

-Amb musics were too loud and some of them didn't fit the event.

-There were some clipping.

-And those 1*1 tile amout textures.

Scripting was decent. Nothing special.

Don't take this critism too seriosly it's just to help you with the future projects.

yay Elfen Lied!

Sorry for mah bad english.

Don't worry, i'm open to new ideas. Big Grin

Sorry for some errors, this was my first CS. My future projects will be better!
Hope you liked it.

**Red** · 12-20-2012, 04:47 PM

(12-20-2012, 04:46 PM)str4wberrypanic Wrote:
(12-20-2012, 04:42 PM)Pyöveli Wrote: Decent story i'll give it a 2,5/5. (Average)

Minuses

-Better lighting(boxlights where too bright in some parts, some parts didn't even have them)

-More unique puzzles.

-Amb musics were too loud and some of them didn't fit the event.

-There were some clipping.

-And those 1*1 tile amout textures.

Scripting was decent. Nothing special.

Don't take this critism too seriosly it's just to help you with the future projects.

yay Elfen Lied!

Sorry for mah bad english.
Don't worry, i'm open to new ideas.
Sorry for some errors, this was my first CS. My future projects will be better!
Hope you liked it.

You have a good imagination, good luck for future projects Big Grin

**str4wberrypanic** · 12-20-2012, 04:50 PM

Oh, by the way, " box lights " ? Clipping? Were?

**Red** · 12-20-2012, 04:54 PM

(12-20-2012, 04:50 PM)str4wberrypanic Wrote: Oh, by the way, " box lights " ? Clipping? Were?

The garden had some clipping issues with the windows and boxlights were
globally too bright. Don't make boxlight too near the shadowparts, try to cover it somehow(cover it with the wall etc.) hard to explain. Smile

**Brosive** · 12-20-2012, 08:23 PM

Just finished your story and I just loved it. 9/10 Only reason is because of the flickering textures and the teleporting hanging man in the archives but, other than that it was really good. Just wish I got the good ending.

**str4wberrypanic** · 12-21-2012, 01:41 AM

(12-20-2012, 08:23 PM)dabro Wrote: Just finished your story and I just loved it. 9/10 Only reason is because of the flickering textures and the teleporting hanging man in the archives but, other than that it was really good. Just wish I got the good ending.

Y U NO LIKE THE TELEPORTING HANGING MAN? D:
Anyway, thank you. Big Grin

I hope you enjoyed it.

**Brosive** · 12-21-2012, 01:46 AM

(12-21-2012, 01:41 AM)str4wberrypanic Wrote: Y U NO LIKE THE TELEPORTING HANGING MAN? D:

It just didn't make any sense but, yea I enjoyed it. Big Grin

**str4wberrypanic** · 12-21-2012, 01:48 AM

(12-21-2012, 01:46 AM)dabro Wrote:
(12-21-2012, 01:41 AM)str4wberrypanic Wrote: Y U NO LIKE THE TELEPORTING HANGING MAN? D:

It just didn't make any sense but, yea I enjoyed it.

It makes sense. If you take the second way, the castle halls, you will see it in the memos.

**Brosive** · 12-21-2012, 02:05 AM

(12-21-2012, 01:48 AM)str4wberrypanic Wrote: It makes sense. If you take the second way, the castle halls, you will see it in the memos.

Oh I must of missed that.