Work in progress Amnesia: City Of Souls

**thomthom44** · 11-03-2013, 05:35 PM

In need of help!
Alright, I think its time ask for some help. The story is coming to an end and really needs someone to be judged. I wont post the whole storyboard here of course so if you are interested and can give good criticism and has story writing experience i will send the file to look at. I'm doing this because I want this to be a good story. And needs to be looked at by others as some of you noticed in my last story, I really like to kill the player hah. If you are interested please comment or send me a personal message. I will be giving it to two members max.

**i3670** · 11-03-2013, 06:01 PM

I'll give it a shot.

**thomthom44** · 11-04-2013, 11:13 PM

Small update
Don't be afraid of the assets I'm using. I'm only using the assets that fit the timeline. But sure does look good! Just some lightning tweaking and adding damage to the wall at the back and this is worthy a good screenshot.

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**Gilligan's Hell** · 11-05-2013, 07:18 AM

Looks nice and slightly eerie. It reminds me a bit of silent Hill 2.

**The chaser** · 11-05-2013, 02:07 PM

(11-04-2013, 11:13 PM)thomthom44 Wrote: Small update
Don't be afraid of the assets I'm using. I'm only using the assets that fit the timeline. But sure does look good! Just some lightning tweaking and adding damage to the wall at the back and this is worthy a good screenshot.

Hey, looks very cool! I think you should make a brighter zone between the two lights, though.

Also, I'd like to give it a shot too Smile

**Alex Ros** · 11-05-2013, 02:15 PM

(11-04-2013, 11:13 PM)thomthom44 Wrote:

Spoiler below!

Perhaps that's just me, grouchy, but Thom I would really recommend to lower down self-illumination value of that decorative AMFP lamp. It's looks just like a flat stain of nearly 100% white and it looks that bad way in original AMFP. Another one thing, are you sure that this decorative lamp is fine for a toilet-bath alike room?

**thomthom44** · 11-05-2013, 03:32 PM

(11-05-2013, 02:15 PM)Alex Ros Wrote:
(11-04-2013, 11:13 PM)thomthom44 Wrote:

Spoiler below!

Perhaps that's just me, grouchy, but Thom I would really recommend to lower down self-illumination value of that decorative AMFP lamp. It's looks just like a flat stain of nearly 100% white and it looks that bad way in original AMFP. Another one thing, are you sure that this decorative lamp is fine for a toilet-bath alike room?

I was thinking about the lamp moddel too for being "To nice". But I could alwayes recreate the model and make it rusty and indeed changing the pure white to actual lamp texture. And these lamps where used alot in metros and bathrooms in the ww2. Good too see you btw. Your the one giving me that page long feedback which realy helped me!

**thomthom44** · 11-09-2013, 01:10 AM

Map update
Here are 2 images of the map im working on. The room to the left on the second picture is where my last screenshot was taken. Sorry if its too dark on your screen, I wil adjust this as soon as I find out how dark it is on another PC.

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**Amnesia Gamer** · 11-09-2013, 12:18 PM

It' s a particular mod. I like the idea.

**thomthom44** · 11-09-2013, 04:13 PM

Ugh, Not easy doing lightning on my pc. Bit too dark and shadows dont seem to have apeared in game very well. Anyway, Il do most lighnting on a difirent pc. This one is too old and I have lost lots of work by the terible breakdowns. They will improve in time. Just not yet sorry!

Spoiler below!