hey, thank you so much for the critiques! I appreciate feedback with actual improvements and tips rather than "it's not good" or similar comments. I'm very very novice at video editing, so it could definitely have been done better!
at any rate, I've got some progress updates for those who are interested. the development of this project is very much 0-60 for a week or two at a time. Jellybean and I have been working really hard lately on what is basically the final encounter of the entire story. I don't want to show any spoilers, but you can definitely have more neat atmospheric goodness! All credit for this room goes to Jellybean!