Subject 16 [WIP Story] **Updated 23/1-11**

**Neatherblade** · 01-08-2011, 02:06 AM

My story is little inspired by the Resident Evil series.

NEW UPDATE **23/1-11
New Screenshots

NEW UPDATE **12/1-11**
New Screenshots

**kailip** · 01-08-2011, 02:23 AM

It looks nice. looking forward to it ;D

**Sel** · 01-08-2011, 02:39 AM

1) Your spotlights in the first room are upside down.

2) Don't have monster encounters in brightly lit rooms, even if they're going to fade to smoke, which is a great effect, but it's totally ruined by him being fully visible, and you being able to get a great look at the creep while he slowly walks up to you and dissapears.

3) Look at some castle floor plans, you have what looks like a pretty main hall, immediately connected to a sewer. Try to be logical with your environments and designs.

Otherwise, from what I see so far your areas are constructed creatively and look pretty good, even if they are a tad too well lit for this.

**Tottel** · 01-09-2011, 11:03 AM

What Sel said + you already show a major spoiler in that video (the monster). I already knew that was going to happen since you didn't even bother running away from it. :/

**DIGI Byte** · 01-09-2011, 11:34 AM

Looks boring, I'm disappointed.
Sorry.

**Neatherblade** · 01-09-2011, 09:05 PM

That monster was just a test script since i have never done scripts before. I have been reworking some areas and done new scripts, but like i have said its all work in progress...

**Gunslingerjh** · 01-10-2011, 11:46 AM

Do I see a reference to Assassins creed ? ;-)

**Neatherblade** · 01-12-2011, 11:05 PM

Check the first post

**Sexbad** · 01-14-2011, 10:20 PM

Very, very nice looking update man

**Neatherblade** · 01-23-2011, 05:27 PM

Check first post