Neatherblade
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Subject 16 [WIP Story] **Updated 23/1-11**
My story is little inspired by the Resident Evil series.
NEW UPDATE **23/1-11
New Screenshots
NEW UPDATE **12/1-11**
New Screenshots
(This post was last modified: 01-23-2011, 05:27 PM by Neatherblade.)
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01-08-2011, 02:06 AM |
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kailip
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
It looks nice. looking forward to it ;D
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01-08-2011, 02:23 AM |
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
1) Your spotlights in the first room are upside down.
2) Don't have monster encounters in brightly lit rooms, even if they're going to fade to smoke, which is a great effect, but it's totally ruined by him being fully visible, and you being able to get a great look at the creep while he slowly walks up to you and dissapears.
3) Look at some castle floor plans, you have what looks like a pretty main hall, immediately connected to a sewer. Try to be logical with your environments and designs.
Otherwise, from what I see so far your areas are constructed creatively and look pretty good, even if they are a tad too well lit for this.
(This post was last modified: 01-08-2011, 02:39 AM by Sel.)
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01-08-2011, 02:39 AM |
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Tottel
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
What Sel said + you already show a major spoiler in that video (the monster). I already knew that was going to happen since you didn't even bother running away from it. :/
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01-09-2011, 11:03 AM |
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
Looks boring, I'm disappointed.
Sorry.
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01-09-2011, 11:34 AM |
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Neatherblade
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
That monster was just a test script since i have never done scripts before. I have been reworking some areas and done new scripts, but like i have said its all work in progress...
(This post was last modified: 01-12-2011, 11:07 PM by Neatherblade.)
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01-09-2011, 09:05 PM |
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Gunslingerjh
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
Do I see a reference to Assassins creed ? ;-)
(This post was last modified: 01-10-2011, 11:46 AM by Gunslingerjh.)
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01-10-2011, 11:46 AM |
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Neatherblade
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story]
Check the first post
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01-12-2011, 11:05 PM |
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story] **Updated 12/1-11**
Very, very nice looking update man
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01-14-2011, 10:20 PM |
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Neatherblade
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RE: Subject 16 [WIP Story] **Updated 12/1-11**
Check first post
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01-23-2011, 05:27 PM |
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