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				The floating stuff is perfectly normal, this is a part of the game where the world becomes a bit chaotic, the architecture of the level changes, things float around randomly, lighting becomes green-ish, etc. ^^. 
I should have probably sayed that before, lul. 
 
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				Oh, okey then I understand   
			 
			
			
			
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What do you think of this 
I know I need to add billboards aswell but I just can't get them right! Can I get any tips about them?
 
Note: I've added a curtain to the second window aswell! So don't comment about that.
			  
			
			
			
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				 (12-21-2013, 06:53 AM)Corvo Wrote:  My first custom story map 
Wow.. this is like 200 times better than my first map which was like a small mansionbase room with a boxlight lol
			  
			
			
			
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				It looks similar to one of my maps... strange.
			 
			
			
 
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				@ Corvo : The room looks fine. I like those assets because they aren't very used, lighting is fine in my opinion. I'm not a good mapper though, you might want to wait for more experienced opinions. 
 
@Kullin : the best advice about billboards is to check out how FG used them in their own maps by opening them ; >. Most of the time though, the billboards that look the best in my humble opinion are those that don't follow a geometric structure, and that are not very shiny. The light effect then comes when the billboards are packed
			 
			
			
 
			
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				 (12-21-2013, 09:34 PM)endosine Wrote:  It looks similar to one of my maps... strange. 
He probably copied it. Since I'm sure not a lot of people have made a room with a table, a bookshelf and a couple of chairs in it. Highly unlikely to be a coincidence.
 
			 
			
			
 
			
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				 (12-21-2013, 09:34 PM)endosine Wrote:  It looks similar to one of my maps... strange. 
Maybe you were his inspiration   
@Corvo
 
Good job man if you really created it by yourself, keep it up.   
			 
			
			
			
				
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				It's just the design, it looked similar to an old map of mine. 
this is the map i mentioned   
			 
			
			
 
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