daortir
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
The floating stuff is perfectly normal, this is a part of the game where the world becomes a bit chaotic, the architecture of the level changes, things float around randomly, lighting becomes green-ish, etc. ^^.
I should have probably sayed that before, lul.
Thanks for your feedback : >
(This post was last modified: 12-19-2013, 01:18 AM by daortir.)
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Kullin
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
Oh, okey then I understand
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Kullin
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
What do you think of this
I know I need to add billboards aswell but I just can't get them right! Can I get any tips about them?
Note: I've added a curtain to the second window aswell! So don't comment about that.
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Corvo
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12-21-2013, 06:53 AM |
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ClayPigeon
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(12-21-2013, 06:53 AM)Corvo Wrote: My first custom story map
Wow.. this is like 200 times better than my first map which was like a small mansionbase room with a boxlight lol
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Gilligan's Hell
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
It looks similar to one of my maps... strange.
The International Narcotics Traffic
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12-21-2013, 09:34 PM |
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daortir
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
@ Corvo : The room looks fine. I like those assets because they aren't very used, lighting is fine in my opinion. I'm not a good mapper though, you might want to wait for more experienced opinions.
@Kullin : the best advice about billboards is to check out how FG used them in their own maps by opening them ; >. Most of the time though, the billboards that look the best in my humble opinion are those that don't follow a geometric structure, and that are not very shiny. The light effect then comes when the billboards are packed
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Wapez
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(12-21-2013, 09:34 PM)endosine Wrote: It looks similar to one of my maps... strange.
He probably copied it. Since I'm sure not a lot of people have made a room with a table, a bookshelf and a couple of chairs in it. Highly unlikely to be a coincidence.
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Slanderous
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
(12-21-2013, 09:34 PM)endosine Wrote: It looks similar to one of my maps... strange.
Maybe you were his inspiration
@Corvo
Good job man if you really created it by yourself, keep it up.
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Gilligan's Hell
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread
It's just the design, it looked similar to an old map of mine.
this is the map i mentioned
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12-21-2013, 10:29 PM |
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