[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[Romulator]

(I had to do it for this screenshot)

I'm sorry Kia, but I am stealing that screenshot. It puts my desktop wallpaper to shame D':

[Echohalls]

This is something i started working on a couple hours back.

Spoiler below!

[LordOfDragons]

This is something i started working on a couple hours back.

Spoiler below!

Boo, a daylight map. In amnesia. The sun... it burns aaaghhhhh
Moar horror moaaaaar. Night. Candles. Moon. Beasts. Lantern. Moaaaaar horroooor :<

Uhm joking. Nice map. You are new here and already mapping? Nice. I dont know what to say because i never made a daytime map...
Maybe play around with billboards and lights to make the sun look epic? (Take a look at kias weekend competition entry. Love it.)

[Skyy]

This is something i started working on a couple hours back.

Spoiler below!

Flowers please.

[Echohalls]

Did some small editing with the lighting

Spoiler below!

[FlawlessHappiness]

It looks very nice. think about adding more foliage.
Flowers, ferns and different size of grass. Remember you can scale any kind of foliage to variate it.

Right now all windows are black. An idea is too see if it's possible to be able to see into some of the rooms. A livingroom with a stove, sofa, shelf with books and some chairs and paintings. Not very big, just to show that this is a house, and not just a wall. Giving it some depth.

[7heDubz]

I'm conflicted.. I prefer the left of this one, http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/0...7adwfw.png
but the right of this one...
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/0...7a82e2.png

What do do?

[FlawlessHappiness]

Where there's something you prefer, there's also something you don't prefer.
I'd go with the first one since the billboards look much better on the right, and the left is darker and more mysterious.

[7heDubz]

Gotta go with the second, the billboard is to much of a dealbreaker

[Echohalls]

Edited the map a bit more, added some more foliage and things.

Spoiler below!