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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
ClayPigeon Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-31-2014, 01:46 PM)Nikson10 Wrote: Here are some screens of a FC I'm making Amnesia The Mandus Family.
The last one is just a model i made with ZBrush it's just a test so don't bother with it.

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Wow, the second picture is amazing!


[Image: 9b29c35d41.png]
04-01-2014, 01:05 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Something made for Amnesia - In Her Memory
[Image: Screen_Screenshot_033.jpg]

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04-02-2014, 01:34 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Hey endo, think you can go back into those lights and up their radius? Perhaps add a big, dark light to blend the lights into the dark a bit better? It's really dark and the lights aren't really pronouncing themselves, so it's hard to see anything.
04-03-2014, 04:13 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.
[Image: tunnels_by_echohalls-d7cv3il.jpg]
[Image: Screen_Screenshot_042.1.jpg]

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04-03-2014, 04:22 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

@endosine

Magnificent! Add a bit more ps and a few decals and it's perfect. Really well done!

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04-03-2014, 06:02 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-03-2014, 04:22 PM)endosine Wrote: Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.
[Image: tunnels_by_echohalls-d7cv3il.jpg]
[Image: Screen_Screenshot_042.1.jpg]

Well done! Great screenshot!
04-03-2014, 06:07 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-03-2014, 04:22 PM)endosine Wrote: Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.
[Image: tunnels_by_echohalls-d7cv3il.jpg]
[Image: Screen_Screenshot_042.1.jpg]

So Amnesia IHM isn't cancelled? Glad to see that you are working on it again!
The screenshots are looking very prommising, keep it up!
04-03-2014, 07:37 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Main menu from an upcoming story.

Feedback highly wanted! Smile

I feel like the Amnesia font just doesn't fit. Should i change it?

Spoiler below!

If you don't draw first, you don't get to draw at all... -The False Shepherd
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04-04-2014, 06:01 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-04-2014, 06:01 PM)RaideX Wrote: Main menu from an upcoming story.

Feedback highly wanted! Smile

I feel like the Amnesia font just doesn't fit. Should i change it?

Spoiler below!

I like it! But i think these candles are a little bit to bright in confront to the wall, i would delete them and add a window or something, the font fits well i think.
04-04-2014, 06:42 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Quote:I like it! But i think these candles are a little bit to bright in confront to the wall, i would delete them and add a window or something, the font fits well i think.

What do you mean by that?

The color light of the candles or the billboards in the back?

Putting even more windows into the alley would seem kind of unnecessary because there need to be SOME sort of light source down there Tongue.

I'll tinker a bit with the color brightness of the candle's pointlight and will report back. Smile

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