[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

**ClayPigeon** · 04-01-2014, 01:05 PM

(03-31-2014, 01:46 PM)Nikson10 Wrote: Here are some screens of a FC I'm making Amnesia The Mandus Family.
The last one is just a model i made with ZBrush it's just a test so don't bother with it.

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Wow, the second picture is amazing!

**Gilligan's Hell** · 04-02-2014, 01:34 PM

Something made for Amnesia - In Her Memory
[Image: Screen_Screenshot_033.jpg]

**Statyk** · 04-03-2014, 04:13 PM

Hey endo, think you can go back into those lights and up their radius? Perhaps add a big, dark light to blend the lights into the dark a bit better? It's really dark and the lights aren't really pronouncing themselves, so it's hard to see anything.

**Gilligan's Hell** · 04-03-2014, 04:22 PM

Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.
[Image: tunnels_by_echohalls-d7cv3il.jpg]

**Artyom** · 04-03-2014, 06:02 PM

@endosine

Magnificent! Add a bit more ps and a few decals and it's perfect. Really well done!

~~tezpull666~~ · 04-03-2014, 06:07 PM

(04-03-2014, 04:22 PM)endosine Wrote: Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.

Well done! Great screenshot!

**Slanderous** · 04-03-2014, 07:37 PM

(04-03-2014, 04:22 PM)endosine Wrote: Well the map was updated earlier today and more lights where added.

So Amnesia IHM isn't cancelled? Glad to see that you are working on it again!
The screenshots are looking very prommising, keep it up!

**RaideX** · 04-04-2014, 06:01 PM

Main menu from an upcoming story.

Feedback highly wanted! Smile

I feel like the Amnesia font just doesn't fit. Should i change it?

Spoiler below!

**Nikson.** · 04-04-2014, 06:42 PM

(04-04-2014, 06:01 PM)RaideX Wrote: Main menu from an upcoming story.

Feedback highly wanted!

I feel like the Amnesia font just doesn't fit. Should i change it?

Spoiler below!

Link for higher quality

I like it! But i think these candles are a little bit to bright in confront to the wall, i would delete them and add a window or something, the font fits well i think.

**RaideX** · 04-04-2014, 08:21 PM

Quote:I like it! But i think these candles are a little bit to bright in confront to the wall, i would delete them and add a window or something, the font fits well i think.

What do you mean by that?

The color light of the candles or the billboards in the back?

Putting even more windows into the alley would seem kind of unnecessary because there need to be SOME sort of light source down there Tongue

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I'll tinker a bit with the color brightness of the candle's pointlight and will report back. Smile