[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

**Slanderous** · 08-31-2014, 03:48 PM

Yeah, maybe some "dead" opponents like barrels, crates scattered around the area in pieces? And the enviroment changes every level you gain for example firstly there are regular crates and at the maximum level ends with dead grunts, etc (assuming grunts will be there of course xd)

**FlawlessHappiness** · 08-31-2014, 04:05 PM

Awesome! Yes! Will be done! Thanks!

**Radical Batz** · 09-05-2014, 09:33 PM

What do you guys think?

Any things needs to change, lighting? I'm pretty bad at lighting so yeah!

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**FlawlessHappiness** · 09-05-2014, 09:35 PM

That looks great! Maybe even more contrast. Try making it even darker, tone down the fog color, and make the light from the hole even brighter.

Also, there's a little hole to the right, where i think i can see outside of the map.

**Radical Batz** · 09-05-2014, 09:39 PM

(09-05-2014, 09:35 PM)FlawlessHappiness Wrote: That looks great! Maybe even more contrast. Try making it even darker, tone down the fog color, and make the light from the hole even brighter.

Also, there's a little hole to the right, where i think i can see outside of the map.

That was gonna be another entrance! I forgot to continue this map, but couldn't resist to show it to you guys lol cause this is the first ever best maps I've ever done in my life!

**Slanderous** · 09-05-2014, 09:50 PM

(09-05-2014, 09:33 PM)Mr. Badcatz Wrote: What do you guys think?

Any things needs to change, lighting? I'm pretty bad at lighting so yeah!

**Kurton** · 09-06-2014, 02:30 AM

Raise the water level or, better yet, lower some of the boulders closest to the camera, as they're pretty high up and look like they're resting on the water as a solid surface. Well done otherwise Smile

**Radical Batz** · 09-07-2014, 09:34 PM

Hello guys, so atm I am trying to make a train station that you find in game in the morning but having trouble with lighting, especially morning lighting.

I am currently using a boxlight and I can't seem to make morning light, something like it's evening or whatever.

Could you guys help me or tell me the gradient color for the boxlight or anything to make it look like it's morning

I want it to be this kinda autumn orangish afternoon morningish! but can;'t seem to do it the way I wanted it. Huh

**Slanderous** · 09-07-2014, 09:49 PM

(05-08-2014, 02:15 PM)RedKnight Wrote: I know, i need to make the floor better. And yes, i put the boxlight in it for better vision. But clipping issues and the black border , how can i fix that mostly?

But thanks btw, i am gonna send a picture in the next 1-3 months

Next 1-3 months?! Does that seriously take you that much to make a map? You could release decent story within that time.

**Neelke** · 09-07-2014, 10:08 PM

(09-07-2014, 09:34 PM)Mr. Badcatz Wrote: Hello guys, so atm I am trying to make a train station that you find in game in the morning but having trouble with lighting, especially morning lighting.

I am currently using a boxlight and I can't seem to make morning light, something like it's evening or whatever.

Could you guys help me or tell me the gradient color for the boxlight or anything to make it look like it's morning

I want it to be this kinda autumn orangish afternoon morningish! but can;'t seem to do it the way I wanted it.

Nowadays, I travel alot with trains. When I look down the rails, I usually see the stones surrounding it alot darker. I would recommend making that plane with brownish stones instead.

Some trees up on the bridge with leaves falling from it would probably be a cool thing as well.