[Updated thread] Need help

[Darkfire]

For this brief moment I looked at the file, I saw no mistakes, so probably there won't be a lot to improve
or... if you want I can add some fancy phrases, at least where it'll fit ^^

[Catalyst]

yeah sure

[Darkfire]

Sorry for double posting, but I think I need to aks you about the context of this story. Sometimes I don't really know what you mean (because I don't know the story). PM me your skype so I can get in touch more easily. I'll be online tomorrow around 15 (looking at this site's clock, in the upper right corner).
I already made some corrections, although most of them are quite small. Mostly adding "the" and "a", also changing some harder phrases that you apparently translated word to word.

I'm sending you the edited file, take a look if you like it. I'll continue to work on this tomorrow.

PS. I'd advise you to use AddMessage script instead mementos in some of these, because they show what character thinks at the moment, not a quest

[Catalyst]

no no , thank you, you did your best some of quests are removed or changed, about main hero's opinion about current situation but their category entry left after change,right now, I can share my first custom story on Moddb

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Darkfire, did you have stories made by you?

[Catalyst]

there is still a problem...when i had uploaded my story on moddb i put there as a tag amnesia mod but in downloads there is written that it doesnt have a concret game

[Mudbill]

Maybe because it's only a tag.

[Catalyst]

but why? all custom stories has as a game Amnesia DArk Descent, but to me it isnt disponible links, mods or engines with original game doesnt exist

[Mudbill]

I don't remember how ModDB works, but a tag is usually nothing more than a keyword for helping users search for content.

It should look something like this though:

[Darkfire]

I can't help you with this, I have no exp on ModDb ;/

PS. I haven't released any CS yet, but you can see my development blog here
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[Catalyst]

Mudbill, I think you have account on moddb, and you posted more than one download isn't it? Can you tell me how to watch my iploaded mods (files), I can't find my story anywhere i have only direct link on moddb